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| Topic Started: Jun 3 2007, 11:32 PM (88 Views) | |
| VirtuaFantice | Jun 3 2007, 11:32 PM Post #1 |
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Im not sure of any of you remember but i had a character named Nara...He was a blue fox demon n such :P well hes been upgraded to completion and ive been developing his storyline for a few years now and currently im writing it up ^_^ this is the first page of Saga 1: The Demon Within. this page pretty much is the summery into the saga...and this saga is also not very big to begin with...i call it the Introduction Saga in which the main characters are being introduced ^^; Well this is it:
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| VirtuaFantice | Jun 14 2007, 04:25 AM Post #2 |
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im not sure about the first paragraph of the actual chapter for Saga 1... can someone check on it for me and tell me what u think ^^ thankies:
i know it has many flaws so please dont be too kind on me, after all, Criticism will help me improve :P and i know...i suck at life xD |
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